Comments : Innermost

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love the images in this and how you start off as though this is in the wrong category, with hope and stunningly gorgeous descriptions only to end up in a downward spiral proving that this was in the right place all along.

    I think that to convey your point a little more thoroughly you should have broken this into two stanzas, but otherwise it's a stunningly dark piece of beauty.