Comments : Winter night

  • 3 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Enjoyed reading. Very peacefu

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is a quiet serenity behind this picture you have drawn. Nature has its way to find herself in one's heart..lovely read.

  • 3 years ago

    by Henry

    A beautiful poem.

  • 3 years ago

    by Deana

    You create a beautiful feeling...what more could one ask!

  • 3 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Resplendent Write!!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Hellon

    Mohan...I really enjoyed this write from you, there was such a sense of peace and tranquillity within you words. I feel the verse could gain more strength if you tightened it up a bit. For example...in the first stanza you have used the word have 3 times which is a lot I feel...my suggestion..

    My shadow starts a walk with me
    helped by moonlight.
    A little snow falls
    yet a clear image prevails;
    as sky blossoms with night flowers.

    The other stanzas could be edited slightly too. This has the potential to be really good...it is good right now but...I feel it could be better.

  • 3 years ago

    by Amreen

    Wow! This is so calm and a peaceful poem. I am just glad to be reading this and it made me feel at peace. I really love Nature and you painted a beautiful picture out here. Beautiful write!

    Keep writing:)

  • 3 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is beautiful

  • 3 years ago

    by Nicollo Machiavelli

    Awesome write I love the imagery you used throughout the poem.

  • 3 years ago

    by imani acheampong

    A good piece

  • 3 years ago

    by imani acheampong

    A good piece

  • 3 years ago

    by imani acheampong

    A good piece

  • 3 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Resplendent Write!!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the serenity behind this write. The joys of nature is limitless and words are never enough to draw her beauty.

    I like the images in each stanza and there are some nice lines within the write which I like. All in all a lovely read.

  • 3 years ago

    by Robin A Walter

    I like the quiet passion of the illusion illustrated there in your Winter Night. I would call it Sill Winter Night, because that is the feeling it gave me of the event described wonderfully.

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautiful!