by Hellon
It always saddens me and maddens me to see a winning poem on the front page without a single comment..so...let me be the first... |
Thank you for the in-depth comment. I avoid ellipses (it's just personal preference since they were overused where I 'came from'), it's deliberately without commas so that it stumbles over itself rapidly without time to be digested. To give an impression of haste, I suppose. Though I completely understand where you're coming from and appreciate your time hugely. Thank you! |
by Meena Krish
Interesting title and an interesting write to go with it too! I especially liked the second stanza and the images in this write is so alive and inviting. Congratulations on the win :) |
Thank you for the comment! As you may tell, most of my titles are nonsense, some aren't... most are. What can ya do? |
by DarkLight
Amazing write. |
Thank you for your kind words! |
by Narph
Judging Comment: |
Haha, that's pretty much how I wrote it, not knowing the end, so I guess that makes sense, eh? |
Haha, that's pretty much how I wrote it, not knowing the end, so I guess that makes sense, eh? |
by Maple Tree
If you are an avid reader and lover of Metaphoric poetry, then hold onto your seat and enjoy the ride with this piece, WOW! |
Wow, that's sure some glowing praise. Thanks very much! |