This is so beautiful and so dark. The reason why I loved it is because of the twisted ending. But first off the child here has a bad life it seems and bad family. They wanted to do something about it. The twisted mind of the child is shown here. I love it. The imagery and story are great overall. Each stanza tells a great story. I think once a person gets pushed over the edge they go to the extreme to get attention. This is a unique poem in a way. I loved the consisant dark you used. The ending is my favorite part. No one would suspect the youngest child no. Overall great!
Wow your good. I was hooked the whole time and the ending was completely unexpected.
Perfect I wouldn't change a thing. The only thing I would say is I'm feening for a part two or some form of another chapter. Too good to just end here