Comments : Beautiful Flames

  • 3 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This is so beautiful and so dark. The reason why I loved it is because of the twisted ending. But first off the child here has a bad life it seems and bad family. They wanted to do something about it. The twisted mind of the child is shown here. I love it. The imagery and story are great overall. Each stanza tells a great story. I think once a person gets pushed over the edge they go to the extreme to get attention. This is a unique poem in a way. I loved the consisant dark you used. The ending is my favorite part. No one would suspect the youngest child no. Overall great!

  • 3 years ago

    by Jinseiwakurai

    Uh, I just like the poem...

  • 3 years ago

    by don

    Dark snister twisted write
    loved it

    don

  • 3 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    This is dark made me think of a horror movie

  • 3 years ago

    by DarkLight

    This got me pap...am loving every line of it. beautiful.

  • 3 years ago

    by Trinity Heart

    Oh my God this is so dark and it made me laugh a bit because it's dark and I love dark poems this made me shiver too because I could actually see the darkness happening

  • 3 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wow!!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Thoughts unseen

    Wow your good. I was hooked the whole time and the ending was completely unexpected.
    Perfect I wouldn't change a thing. The only thing I would say is I'm feening for a part two or some form of another chapter. Too good to just end here

  • 3 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Plot twist at the end. Nice.