Simply excellant description of subject matter

raw, emotional, powerfull, can so relate

Another striking poem with tons of emotion pouring out of it.
Both poems which you have posted are heart breaking in the sense that these are feelings which you felt/feel.
But wow I got to say you are truly able to amaze me as a fan of poetry by putting your feelings to paper in such a way that you touch the reader with all of the senses which you may be experiencing.
Truly remarkable and amazing write.
5/5