Fireworks

by Robert   Jan 30, 2014


Lights blaze the midnight sky
With different color's and shape's of every kind
I couldn't help but notice the little thrill
That would keep my saying i'm a kid still

With each one that went up I would make a wish
That many day's would continue just like this
With the wishes of many exploding in the sky
Our heart's kept screaming our dreams will never die

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  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I have just a tiny question,

    In this line:

    ... color's and shape's <-- are the ( ' ) apostrophes an indication of something that I am not seen it? OR are those part of your style of writing?

    Other than that, this was a lovely write. I enjoyed it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice when lights blaze the midnight sky with different color and shape of every kind.
    Good work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice and paints a wonderful image of the fireworks and what memories they bring to you. Nice work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yeah, fireworks do have a way to excite us and
    it does not matter what age you as you feel like a child once again.

    Liked the rhyme scheme you have used and the
    tone of happiness shines through...nice read.

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