Comments : Broken Arrows

  • 3 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I personally don't think a lot needs to be said here :). As far as I saw nothing needs to change. I loved the use of broken arrows and I'll explain that in a min. The use of sadness is great here and the ability to not stray off of it through out is well done. Each stanza tells a sad story that I think can be represented as a family and you showed each view point of them. I could be wrong be that's what I got from it. A broken home and abuse is very hard to overcome. I loved how you detailed each characters sadness. That was great. The broken arrows are represented by the broken life they each hold and how they feel inside I think. The ending with them is perfect. Perfect to me. The story is fantastic and you didn't hold back at all. Love it!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Rebecca Bentley

    This poem touched me on so many levels.
    each stanza as heartbreaking as the last one and sadly many things i can relate to. this is vey well penned, and can tell its been written by the heart,
    very good write! i look forward to reading more of your work 5/5

  • 3 years ago

    by Donna B

    Very powerful

  • 3 years ago

    by Nicollo Machiavelli

    Loved this.

  • 3 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Good poem when saw title i to see because i was gonna get this title really good poem 5\5 p&l midnight sky

  • 3 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    Very deep and very heartfelt. U did a wonderful job of painting s picture with your words. Excellent work!!