Comments : The transparencies of white

  • 3 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Wow!

  • 3 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I agree this is a wow poem :). The wording is fantastic in the right spots making this poem shine. I am really not sure how to comment this one because there are no words. You said it perfectly in your poem. I really wish I could nominate this. :) no more words. Beautiful! !!

  • 3 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I agree with the others. I really don't know how to comment other than excellent written

  • 3 years ago

    by Everlasting

    There's something in this poem that I agree yet I don't agree with. I'm not sure exactly how to comment but regardless of my points of view. I enjoyed the voice in this poem.

  • 3 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    I agree with everyone else it had it's up's & down's but all in all good piece

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I'm hooked on every stanza in this poem. So simple and elegantly penned. Congratulations on the win :)