Comments : Heart Candy Thoughts

  • 3 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Great poem my friend about a wedding? it's lovely 5\5

  • 3 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I really like the idea you used here, of the candy hearts, and how the messages on them are so sweet, but cliché. You used this well in the poem to portray what you wanted to say to this person, and how you are aware of how over heard the phrases are, but you feel them and want to express them.

    It was a true enough line on your second stanza, when words are said so much that they do not seem to mean as much as they do when they are not said often.

    It raises the question of telling people you love them. If you tell them every day, will they really feel it, but if you do not say it enough, will they know it.

    Interesting poem. xx