This is great meme!! Questions, the statements, really thought provoking! Love the bit about how far can one stretch his step before it's considered going back...that is excellent...kinda inspires an idea out of me.
I too have missed your writing, and I like the deepens in this one. I love poetry that makes me think. In fact, it's hard to even comment right away because I need to go read this again and rethink about it haha.
I also wish there was!
Thanks a lot for the comment sweetie :)
4 years ago
by Beautiful Soul
This is also very powerful meme. I like the way you started this out. It seems like here you traveled the distance with a certain person and you have come to a point where you have to think about your life. The second stanza asks a nice question. Silence can be deadly and in this I think you are saying that memorieswill become regret or you will firget them and hope move on. The end of the poem is great because itseems like you cchoose to be free and you took a shot at this person because they walked out of your life. Beautiful write