I loved this alot really love the second stanza because you are talking about a serious time but the second stanza is so funny

I might scream
I might hear my aunt scream
I might see my grandma
rush to the stove
I might see my mother
rush to my grandma
I might see them spill some water
on to the faucet
onto the pan on fire
while i stand still

this is a sad time you speak of but there you gave it a funny side you are a good writer the voice here proves that really i loved this piece always peace&love midnight sky

I like it.