Practice

I love this poem... I love love love it.

I like the simplicity of this write and the smoothness it holds till the end. The more we write, we find a rhythm of our own. Whether it is rhyme or not it sticks around and it becomes perfect, just like this! Loved it!

I really love this poem lucero. I think the overall poem is talking about how we all learn different styles of poetry and once we find what works for us then we can truly grow and I think this is what you mean. Rhyming or not we must find what we love to write. This poem has a simplicity to it but it speaks to me. The lines sends a message like you are talking to another person. Time does go by fast I agree. But as time goes by we learn to become more mature. I liked the subtle rhymes personally because they work well. And lastly I liked your final stanza because people can tell you how to write nut it doesn't matter because it only matters what you want. Lovely

This is how i feel sometimes people say i rhyme way to much luce this is a great piece top favorites of mine it is a little funny i like that i like how you use your rhymes they were awesome how you said in the frist two stanza's how you can't remember how long funny i am never disappointed with your poetry your are a great writer awesome job peace&love midnight sky