Comments : A Reflection's Promise

  • 10 years ago

    by Darren

    I think the layout may have put people off from commenting, It looks like a chunk of prose. However if you take the time to read it, you soon discover that this is a very intelligent write.
    There is real frustration brimming under the surface of this.
    I read it aloud the second read through and TBH it sounds like a monologue.
    You have chosen so many powerful words in this and I enjoyed reading.

    • 10 years ago

      by Smaccams

      Yes, I thought so too that the layout might be a little off-putting, despite it looking better in a word document it would have put me off too!

      Then again, I did aim for a sort of monologue so it's great that you could acknowledge that.
      Thank you very much! :)