A Photographer walks in a Forest

by Narph   May 22, 2014


Click click click clickclickclick
click click
click click click
click-great massive eye-click
clicks, sticks click
stick, stick, stuck boot,
root, click stuck boot, stick!
trip. trunk. stuck in mud,
slick, click, mud, stuck, suck, squelch
boot root, mud stream stuck
click-great massive eye-click, tripped
stripped, tree, stuck, stump, sunk, jump
mud mud mud click mud click root
stick mud, stick boot
stick slosh, stream, sticks,
trip trip trip-great
massive eye- slick.
click. whiz, whizzed. whir.
click, fixed.
click.
onwards.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Darren

    Judges comments

    It is a refreshing change to find a piece that is written in this way. It is a risk to post this as most people wont get it. It was also a risk for the nominator to nominate. It is a nature poem that screams nature, just look at the assortment of nature words mixed in with the mechanical word 'click'. I love how 'click' is an intruder that ruins a great descriptive piece of poetry. Much like the photographer is intruding in this forest disturbing the wildlife and stomping about oblivious to what may lay under foot. For those of you that may not agree that this is a '10' poem, read it aloud as you picture in your mind a forest or wood nearby. You can almost smell the dampness of the fauna and the stickiness of the mud, all interrupted by that annoying 'click'.

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice describe passion of work.
    click click............click

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice describe passion of work.
    click click............click

  • 9 years ago

    by silvershoes

    This is genius. Your approach to poetry is one-of-a-kind.

  • 9 years ago

    by Meme

    Thats one great poem you have in here. Congrats on the win!