Happy Soul (Rictameter)

by Sylvia   Jun 2, 2014


Happy
because of you.
My soul is smiling now,
a heart is filled with joy and love.
Together we can conquer anything,
live our dreams, create memories
to last us forever.
You have made me,
Happy.

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Rictameter Form Requirements
Starting your first line with a two syllable word, you then consecutively increase the number of syllables per line by two. i.e. 2, 4, 6, 8, 10 Then down again, 8, 6, 4, 2 Making the final line the same two syllable word you began with.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is beautiful, it actually doesn't feel like a formed poem when you are reading it, the flow is very good and I didn't see any words being forced. It went together very well and left me with a little smile on my face. I agree with Everlasting - this could be a little poem inside a greeting card.

    Well done

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I agree with Lucero it sounds nice and heart warming to be in a greeting card!

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Sylvia, this rictameter sounds like it belongs to a greeting card. I like it.

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