Comments : Anxiety

  • 9 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Some good imagery and description here, I felt you explained anxiety really well.

    I liked the use of your rhyming, though it didn't flow too nicely and seemed a little forced it didn't go off track to the poem (which in my opinion is easily done)

    Overall I enjoyed reading this piece. The last stanza I felt was the best.

    5/5 from me for this brilliant piece =)

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    Thank you :)