Comments : Visage

  • 9 years ago

    by Kakera

    Wow! Very powerful words and meaning, and the presentation and structure gave it even more effect. Absolutely wonderful.

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This poem is stunning Andrea. I feel like you found the perfect title for this poem as it fits well. Anyway for the poem itself... I think the first sentence could mean you want to frame a human per say. At least draw a person when they are happy and remember that moment forever. Or it could mean that when a writer is writing that puts a smile to their face. I really liked the word punctuation used here because for a writer that is everything and that is how you can tell how a person is feeling at that time. And the ending sets up well because you tell us exactly how you are feeling or how you want someone else to feel while reading this. There (to me) are many different stories here but they all lead into one and the ending says it all. Beautiful work and I nominated this before. You can always make powerful messages in such few words.