I have no idea what to comment. There is just so much raw detail here that its mind blowing. I'm going to nominate this.

To me this is about an angel or a person who thinks he is an angel that has fallen from the graces of God. I loved at the start of this the smile as he was falling. That tells me that he wanted to fall. Maybe he even lost his mind. And at the end he thought he was his own god. Only to find out that it was not as it seems. When you have that much power it can really get to you and destroy you. That is karma or even irony at work. I cannot speak more highly of this poem. It seems like there are chapters each with their own title and story. You could see everything happening. Well done for the poem. Very impressed.