Comments : She left tracks

  • 9 years ago

    by Skyler

    This is a very potent piece. It reminds me of Morrissey's Black Cloud.
    "I can woo you, and I can amuse you, but I cannot make you mine"
    5/5 for feeling and delivery.

    • 9 years ago

      by joseph santacruz

      Thank you for your comment.I am a big Smiths fan. She is beautiful(on the outside) but just "heartbreak on lay away" when I let her in

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    It's so hard when the one you want the most just will not stay around for you-turns love into agony. Well done-