5/5.Meena you have so beautifully expressed the pain for the one who is no longer in your life.

show the weight of my pain
nor express how much
I miss calling out your name

The flow is excellent

Days have turned to months
and the wound is still fresh,

Simile of tears

Salty river I bury
into the pillow

It might seem to the world that you have overcome the grief

Behind each laugh sits
the weight of my pain

Excellent write!!!

I agree that you have beautifully expressed your thoughts/ an absence within this piece. It really is well done. I really like the way your own voice came out so clearly in this piece without pulling from the emotion or story. Great job with that. I also really liked your third stanza, I'm not entirely sure why, but it really stands out to me.

Beautiful write, i understand that pain,

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm

meena ji wawoooooooo,
fully emotional poem.
Good work

No words in the dictionary will describe this poem.
5/5