Existence

by Baby Rainbow   Jul 28, 2014


I have come to realise
that I am all alone,
in this world we live in;
the planet we call home.

I am but an existence...

...and to the rest unknown.

    report violation
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  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Small poem by Saffie this week, raw, simplistic and to the point= LOVE IT!

    The author of this poem as a gift for telling it like it is and how she is feeling at the moment, which is why she is so adored by many on this site, very talented writer and this poem can relate to all readers.

    The brink of loneliness and pure exhaustion of feeling alone in the universe, it's a powerful emotion expressed in lovely, simplistic form.

    This poem stands out on so many levels, I had to highlight it this week!

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Loved your poem...

  • 9 years ago

    by Karla

    We all are alone.Love your piece.

  • 9 years ago

    by Natalie

    I really liked the line 'I am but an existence' at times this is very true. Well written.

    Natalie.

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5.At one point of time we all go through this state and feel a void .Simply said with great depth.

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