Comments : Seen and Heard

  • 9 years ago

    by Masked metaphor

    I love this!! I can deeply relate to the pain of not being seen or heard, to be left out, used, abused and torn apart!
    This stanza stood out to me most...

    Her mother wants nothing to do with her.
    Her father breaks her spirit.
    Her brothers and sisters treat her like crap.

    ^^
    I grew up with this exact treatment yet I only have a brother not a sister...

    I love the way you expressed yourself and let your inner emotions poor out.

    5/5