Comments : The Journey (Terza Rima Sonnet)

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is amazing, however; this stanza stands out to me the most:

    Tear shadows break upon a mornings relief
    we muster strength to share a secret untold
    slithering out like serpents, from fallen leaf.

    it left me thinking and caught my attention perfectly.

    Beautiful write.