A Rhyme for You

by Maple Tree   Aug 3, 2014


You're so sweet, just doing your thing
I sit quietly, listening to Stevie Nicks sing.

We are so comfortable, you and I
as the fan blows and the wildling's sigh.

A romantic kind of night, alone in our castle
peaceful unity, free from hassle.

Thank you Jim, for being you
and loving me the way you do....

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  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Aww this was so sweet and tender. I like this style.

    Simple but simply beautiful.

  • 9 years ago

    by IbaKer

    I LOVE IT .... IT IS SO CUTE & SWEET

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice poem.

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    For being simple you really created your scene and shared your heart with us. The love you have here shines through beautifully and that really gave the piece a kind of character I miss from not reading as many of your works lately. The simplicity here is great and the fact its just one blissful moment in time being described is also beautiful.

    Wonderful piece.

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I thought this couplet poem was adorable and the form you choose was perfect since you're dedicating this to the one you love two people two lines per part beautiful

    -Bet