I thought this couplet poem was adorable and the form you choose was perfect since you're dedicating this to the one you love two people two lines per part beautiful

-Bet

For being simple you really created your scene and shared your heart with us. The love you have here shines through beautifully and that really gave the piece a kind of character I miss from not reading as many of your works lately. The simplicity here is great and the fact its just one blissful moment in time being described is also beautiful.

Wonderful piece.

Nice poem.

I LOVE IT .... IT IS SO CUTE & SWEET

Aww this was so sweet and tender. I like this style.

Simple but simply beautiful.