Comments : Avalanche

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You've definitely got yourself a gem and I couldn't be more happy for you. I'm glad you have someone who makes you feel special and makes you realize how beautiful you are inside & out. I liked the avalanche metaphor, it was something fresh & new.. not entirely sure of it being the title, since it doesn't have that 'soft' touch to it, seeing as 75% percent of the poem talks about the perseverance of love and life, but in the end - it is just a title & really this 'avalanche' was the beginning of what turned out to be something wonderful. Sometimes someone has to go through the worst of times in order to receive the best. Love you! I'm happy that you're happy. It makes me smile :)