Comments : Andrea (Acrostic)

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    As poets we are our own worst critic. We never do know what people will say or if they will read our poems. The message is simple but I think every single person can relate to it. Awesome use of your name as well. Nominated. Well done

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice work with the form but for the acrostic, the title should be your name since that is what the "acrostic" spells.

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    You are correct Sylvia and thank you... :-)

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    It does work well in that it does not sound forced, reads very natural and seems to express doubt from the writer wondering if people really do read or care what they write and that they, the writer, really does have something to say.

    • 9 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      Thank you Sylvia and Beautiful Soul :-)