Great poem!

It flows beautifully and I love the metaphores. Nice message too, It is true that sometimes we get too deep in a relationship that we don't want to let go, yet we don't realise how distructive it has been to us.

Wow! What a blunt and powerful poem - especially the end which really hits hard:
"....but the load was too heavy and so was our mess" - excellent. I love your work, Rania.
All the best,
Ben