Heart rendering,so very nicely penned.
Unable to speak out the wrong done,just a smile.
The crying heart,the rolling tears are unnoticed by the ones who are pointing fingers.
Being in their amidst,seems was the foolish decision,tormented to insanity.
Another really touching poem of yours, again I can relate to the pain in these words. You always show your imagery and emotions so well, instead of just writing about it, you really show it. A talent that I think is hard to master but you make it seem so easy!
I think the person in this poem is feeling loneliness really bad, even in a room filled with people, it seems that no one really notices you, no one is looking behind your eyes to see the hidden pain and tears, but the greed and lies of them implies that they are perhaps selfish people and would not really want to know the truth you hide.
I like your ending, it seemed kind of directed back at yourself rather than to a third person or audience. I wonder if loneliness in a crowded room can turn you in sane!
Thought provoking poem, great write!
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
A really powerful and well penned piece, Meena. I love the layout too.
All the very best,