Comments : Lost

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I've been reading your poetry for years now... never disappointed Mark, you have a gift! The message is very inspirational...

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment:

    I like the message in this write. An important lesson
    of life has been taught here using "driving" as a
    scenario. The driver is on his way but somewhere
    along the line gets lost; at the same time filled
    with doubts and fears. Then in the fifth stanza
    he tells how divine intervention put him on the
    right path showing him the way. Perhaps
    showing much more creating a renewed sense in life.

    I especially liked these last lines:

    Though life's byways might seem a bit criss-crossed
    To find your way sometimes you must get lost

    ^^Yes so very true. Sometimes we have to get lost
    in order to find our way and live life with faith. We
    all have our fate written and once in a while God
    shows us the way when things go wrong.

    An encouraging read.