Anonymous

by earlgreytea   Sep 29, 2014


Big brother is watching, Little sister close your eyes. Anonymous can find me here, While mason softly cries. Illuminate; with false light, While the darkness here is real, I can give you proof of all of this... but none of how I feel.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    A catchy little piece, well written

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very clever wording that's deeper than what meets the average eyes

    The only thing I would have done differently

    "Big brother is watching,
    Little sister close your eyes.
    Anonymous can find me here,
    While mason softly cries.
    Illuminate; with false light,
    While the darkness here is real,
    I can give you proof of all of this...
    but none of how I feel. "

    would help the reader with the intended breaks

  • 9 years ago

    by moon face

    I wish I could nominate this tooo !!! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Hungry for? Food? Of what source?

    • 9 years ago

      by earlgreytea

      I do rather enjoy nourishment in the form of pizza..... XD

  • 9 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    That's a good question. I'm kind of hungry right now...?

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