Comments : Promising

  • 9 years ago

    by Mayday

    (My attempt at an interpretation on this, I apologize if I'm wrong!) But I think that this painted quite a horrid and sad scene of such a poor pitiful being. Somehow it seems to me that it's body has been lamed? Or I get the idea that somehow this form has expired for him so instead of being trapped inside of it, left in pain, death is actually a blessing, something kind to release him, and merciful. Again, that's my interpretation on it! I had to read it a couple of times, I think you captured the sympathy of any reader very well.
    5/5

    • 9 years ago

      by Armada the Gestalt

      Thanks for taking the time to comment! Interpretation is what poetry's all about. One's as good as another. I'm glad I managed to give you an image like that!