Oh kakera this so so terribly beautiful!!! You made my heart ache in longing with your magnificent words, the metaphor of love being as two instruments in splendid harmony is so ethereal,I truly could hear the violins playing a melancholy melody in my mind as the words reached a crescendo, then slowly, sadly and sweetly the music died down"even though your absence makes my heart ache,I still hear the sound of your singing everytime I close my eyes"so heartfelt and beautiful, whoever this poem is dedicated to is so incredibly lucky to be the recipient of such soul endearing love, this is truly a masterpiece kakera, you've opened my eyes once again and given me new hope for love of the soul tainting kind, thank you for allowing me to read this :-)

Jean--------- I have difficulty expressing my feelings when my mouth has hit the floor.... HOLY MOTHER OF TREES!

I will do Jean ;-) I really, truly love this work by the way, so incredibly stunning!!!!I know how you feel though (your statement of having to either write a really bleak, or a love poem to do really great) :-P

Jean- I would like to add a few things....

On your title: Piano and Violin is great.. but I might sudgest going a bit futher on it by saying for example: Piano keys and Violin Strings or

Ivory and Strings or go really wild and do this: "Piaolin" Piano and Violin mixed. or ....
"Vioano" that is really fun and adds a new flare to the title. I have been known to do that from time to time and it helps with the message you are trying to display.

Also: Do not re-edit this piece other than maybe play with the title some... because as we discussed in private, this piece is very sacred and in the way it flowed per writing, you never want to edit those... leave them as is... <3

You are very welcome :-)

Omg! I just imagine how you used a simple piano and violin and made this poem a masterpiece..,. And also the title is well apt:)

Very interesting title, very unique and clever, and I could not think of anything better to title this poem with, great choice!

I really enjoyed this poem, I like how it feels quite honest, and yet has a lot of creativity about it.

I am enjoying your work right now, and although longer poetry can sometimes be difficult or tiring to read, I find with yours that they are laid out in a way that is easy for a reader to hold focus, and the flow you have within them is very easy, very connective from line to line, making it a pleasure to read. It is refreshing to know that longer poems can still be made, and still be amazing!

I adore this little story - and how you took me along with you for the ride... thank you.

keep writing!!