I like this poem, it's so real like I can feel it from within!!

Awesome write, I've said this on a few poems recently but with long write my concentration tends to wake and my brain gets bored but this kept it going right until the end, the meter was spot on and word choice and flow etc was great.

I like poetry that has a kinda questioning theme to it, it makes the reader really think about the poem and can't help but reflect on their own life and ultimately as writers that what we want aside from releasing our inner demon's.

Great write!

Ben

Wonderful wonder of poetic beauty :)

Amazing to read

Michael x