Comments : Re: the girl with a tale that's bigger than her hands

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    For some reason, I continued thinking of "tail" when I read "tale." It's a ESL mistake.

    Do you still have that older poem in this site?

    • 9 years ago

      by Saerelune

      I could imagine because in the previous poem I did play around with tail/tale quite some bit, and I guess it slipped into this poem too. ;) I actually don't have it posted on this site anymore, but I can pm you if you want to.

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Haha.. It will be easier if you just posted it in your account. Though if you prefer to Pm, I will be happy either way.

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Congratulations on your second win!

    I like the idea you gave this sequel, and I also appreciate the time difference between the original poem and the reply to that poem.

    Again, the poem is filled with really good metaphors which tell a touching story, really beautiful write. The funeral town is such powerful words that really linger behind with your readers! The ending in this poem is very moving!

    Another enjoyable read, glad you decided to share this.