Comments : Justified - (song with recording)

  • 2 years ago

    by Brittany Ottmo

    Wow, this is a great poem. Had me from the start. I would say I love how you made this to where the reader can picture what is going on..

    "Sold your story to a preacher,
    with a tongue between your eyes.
    Then faltered on to be his saviour,
    through the bindings of your thighs."

    Great job! 5/5

    *~BrittBratt~*

    • 2 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks for reading it! It's a pretty mellow tune - would be a lot better if you could hear it. I suck at singing but the guitar sounds nice though :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Marvellous

    Patience awaits a desire. When it's over, result is called.

    • 1 year ago

      by Maher

      Sums this song up pretty well. Thank you, sir :)