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by Brittany Ottmo
Wow, this is a great poem. Had me from the start. I would say I love how you made this to where the reader can picture what is going on..
"Sold your story to a preacher,
with a tongue between your eyes.
Then faltered on to be his saviour,
through the bindings of your thighs."
Great job! 5/5
Thanks for reading it! It's a pretty mellow tune - would be a lot better if you could hear it. I suck at singing but the guitar sounds nice though :)
Patience awaits a desire. When it's over, result is called.
Sums this song up pretty well. Thank you, sir :)