Bloom in Life

by alka mendiratta   Nov 24, 2014


Have you seen

Cotyledons moving up
Turning into leaves

Butterfly struggling
Out of chrysalis

From Nature we learn
The key words

Patience and perseverance
Lead us to glory

Be victorious
Bloom in Life

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  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmmmm
    wawooooo what to say,
    i would say good transition.

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Have you seen

    Cotyledons moving up
    Turning into leaves

    ^^Nice way of starting a poem by asking the reader have you seen. The gap between allows the question to sink in. I've not really seen a cotyledon turn into a leaf but reading this draws an image.

    Butterfly struggling
    Out of chrysalis

    ^^This I've witnessed and even though its a struggle, in this too there is beauty to be admired. The cycle of life.

    From Nature we learn
    The key words

    Patience and perseverance
    Lead us to glory

    ^^Nature does have a way to teach us; if only we stop and look around us. No matter how much we trample across the grass, pluck her beautiful children from their stems and chop down her generations...they still survive. They teach us just as the poem says-patience and perseverance.

    Be victorious
    Bloom in Life

    ^^A nice inspirational message for readers. No matter what happens, or what we lose, or what is taken from us, we can always learn and be victorious...nice read!

    • 9 years ago

      by alka mendiratta

      Thank you Meena for interpreting it so well.The message is well conveyed.

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