Comments : Poem Twenty One

  • 9 years ago

    by CuteThingsGoneWrong

    Ohh wow. I don't read enough of your work.

    I love how this poem tells the story of someone who seems to be drinking to cope with life but was running away from an alcoholic.

    The way you described how the pain crept into the person was very well written, that seeping pain where reality sinks in from every angle.
    I do very much like this poem :3