Get into your soul.
Let it dance you in.
Shakin' its hips and flowing.
Light your eyes with sparks, and sing your tongue's delight.
Felt from within.
Arms of embracing.
Unconditional power and otherworldly love.
You have been hugged.
This is short piece that said everything, so honest and full of emotions. It was nice to read your poetry and looking forward to read more.
3 years ago
This is a short piece that captures the heart of everyone that reads it. It is simple and truly in the spirit of being a mother. The way she described a hug so purely and so detailed in a beautiful use of words is wonderful. There is an image of this moment of how pure and stunning a hug can be and just how much something so simple can mean to someone you love. The style of this piece is unique and phenomenally done. it leaves an impact that most pieces are not able to. There is a sense of self in this piece, despite being dedicated to her children, that really shines and adds personality to this and makes it that much more of a delight to read.