Comments : Did it survive? *

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love the free flow and choice of words
    ....also the metaphors are fantastic

  • 2 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Agree with Michael. This poem holds a depth of questioning insanity. The metaphor here is the crazy spreading like wildfire and it is affecting everyone around you. Only time will tell if your friendship did survive. But here you are saying that you are the fire that spreads and nothing can stop you from putting you out. Too often people blame themselves for the failings of others, but it is not always our fault. You want the friendship to survive, but if it does not all you can do is apologize. I like this for the metaphors, because you didn't overplay them at all. Each stanza does a great job in detailing the poem, and through your eyes I see sadness, because you feel the friendship is not going to work out. 5/5

    • 2 years ago

      by Purvi Gadia

      Kinda right james...
      But the metaphor actually is my anger that emerged from my craziness that went out of control.

  • 2 years ago

    by uttAm

    Superb poem..i really liked the usage of methapors:)