Haunted by Death
by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX Dec 8, 2014
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They say when a person dies the person you knew is no longer there but what if they really are? What if the person you loved you cared about you laughed with shared ever secret With its still there somehow. The body might be cold no beating heart but what if they're still in there? they said ever body when it dies there spirit moves on what if they weren't ready to move on? what if there's a little piece of them is still holding on. What do you do ? But if you close your eyes every night and you see them in your dreams or even in your nightmares does that mean? they have unfinished business with you? Or Are they coming for you? They say we all have a life an afterlife but they're not finished with the previous one so many questions so many unanswered secrets what if they come back to haunt you? Things you wish you did or wish you would have said I have these questions everyday because I'm haunted by death. |
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9 years ago
Ok I think I fixed all my mistakes sometimes I just get so caught up in my writing and what I'm trying to feel my message and everything I forgot to check myself and I appreciate it when people point out my mistakes and makes me a better writer. If you would please go through and check to make sure I fixed everything thank you bunches Lilly :)
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9 years ago
Dear friend I have some tragic news to tell you honey, you have so many errors on your poem hon I would go back and recheck your poem, because if I went into detail you would cringe because that's how many errors you have on your wonderful poem, the concept was there, the emotions were there and boy did I love the message of the poem but the tiny errors can mess up even the most stunning poem made. Either way I enjoyed the read but I wish you could go back and fix the poem. Here's a tip it's commas, some words like "every" should be "ever", and just fix that honey and you'll be golden! 5/5
-Mori
