This was another good entry for the title toss challenge, and you also managed to combine so many of the prompts together well, so good job on that.

Your title alone is very unique and interesting, really eye catching which is what usually draws readers to a poem, so good choice!

The content is sad, alone and feelings of being trapped in this situation of loneliness. I think you done well with your wording about the way this person betrayed and hurt you, especially being trampled on like a flower.

Good work.

The title of this drew me in! I love the way you worded every inch of this poem! When someone betrays you, it is hard to accept at first. I gotta say this is one of my favorite parts::

'...which has bind us so far
and the realm we built together
has been ruined and damaged by you--
your suspicion; your brutality
you disguised yourself and deceived me
as my protector, but in reality you are
the sculptor of my destruction...'

Disguised yourself and deceived me.... I can relate on this poem. I love everything about it! Great job!! ^_^

*~BrittBratt~*