Comments : No Longer Tempted

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    OOOOOHHHHHH!!!!

    :))

    Im soooo glad you reposted this :)

    I sooo love this poem :)))))

  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Oh i love it tooo! almost forgot to resubmit XD

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Wow, this poem is sublime. It's pain of having to let a lover go; releasing them from ' the unleashed gate of us'

    Excellent writing and rhyming.

    Well done,

    Michael