Comments : Painted silhouette

  • 9 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I adore this poem! But there are a few typos I believe:

    Yet she was no more than a plain. A plain what?

    Yet it fitted her..should this not be fit instead of fitted?

    Utensils IF insecurites - of?

    And where you put U maybe to spell it out instead...

    This is a stunning write worth the read!