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by Purvi Gadia   Dec 31, 2014


I dwell inside four walls
with black and white here and there,
and still I see my life colorful all around,
colors everywhere.

The secret of this lies in how our eyes perceive -
even a dull life comes alive,
and even a lively life gets buried.

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  • 2 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    The title is perfect...

    It needs no alternative and is colourful enough if we just use our eyes to see.

    Turquoise
    Indigo
    Tulip
    Lavender
    Evergreen
    Lime
    Eggshell
    Strawberry
    Sunrise
    ^
    Perfect, full of beauty and colour.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 3 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    I see this is as your life in general, and it's quite interesting to see what you see. I loved the last ending stanza the most because, this is now what we all; what humanity sees and while it's different in every way for everyone else it's unique to me. I loved the last line it truly makes me think twice about my life, since it's lively in a way and that's true my life got burned, and went up in flames, but we all heal from those wounds and keep on going even if we hate the lives we live. Thank you for sharing. 5/5

    -Mori

  • 3 years ago

    by ron parrish

    How about four walls
    this is a great insight write
    with all it`s wisdom

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Basically, its about how you see your life-the way we see it is the way we live it. What we put into it, take out of it and learn from it depends on the individual.

    An insight into a fact of life. You can color it with colors or we dwell in a colorless world, we can put happiness into it or move ahead with our sadness. So we live how we see. Well done!

  • 3 years ago

    by Valentino

    Very beautiful verses you write, Purvi. Liked it!
    Well... here're few titles given below .. choose one appropriate you think you should..

    #1. The Night - One Heart
    (Puckered Heart)
    #2. Darken Sky
    #3. The Secret - One spirit
    #4. Restless Love
    #5. The Life Behind The Wall