Comments : Titleless*

  • 3 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Powerful words, and quite thought-provoking too, leading your reader to travel many avenues.

    Shame you cannot think of a title. I am rubbish with titles, but I will suggest a few you can maybe play around with, or not.

    Titles:

    Perceiving Hope,
    Perceiving Life,
    Colours of Life,
    Behind Four Walls,
    Colourless Hope
    Hopeful Colour
    Inside These Walls
    Colour Facts
    Facts Of Life
    Contemplating Life
    Inside Life
    Inside The Walls Of Life

    • 3 years ago

      by Purvi Gadia

      Thankyou saffie.
      I am always stuck when it comes to titles. :P

  • 3 years ago

    by Brookie

    For those who cant see grey
    colorblind intentions
    When color fades
    The shades of grey
    Idk

  • 3 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I do have a small suggestion for you here, in the last two lines I think in my opinion it would read better as:

    even a dull life comes alive;
    even a lively life gets buried.

    The semi colon gives voice to the sentences being combined, and taking out "and" makes it flow better in my opinion. Nominated though because I love how much detail you put into this for being such a short write. We all see in black and white but if we opened our eyes the world is rich with color! 5/5

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Actually, I love the title you have.....it truly ties into the message. I say leave it as "titleless"

  • 3 years ago

    by uttAm

    Short but its really impressive....:)

  • 3 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Nicely penned:)

    If one is in high life condition,that is in positive thinking,everything around seems glorious and bright .
    The low life condition,that is in negative thought process, makes everything around dull and meaningless.

  • 3 years ago

    by Valentino

    Very beautiful verses you write, Purvi. Liked it!
    Well... here're few titles given below .. choose one appropriate you think you should..

    #1. The Night - One Heart
    (Puckered Heart)
    #2. Darken Sky
    #3. The Secret - One spirit
    #4. Restless Love
    #5. The Life Behind The Wall

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Basically, its about how you see your life-the way we see it is the way we live it. What we put into it, take out of it and learn from it depends on the individual.

    An insight into a fact of life. You can color it with colors or we dwell in a colorless world, we can put happiness into it or move ahead with our sadness. So we live how we see. Well done!

  • 3 years ago

    by ron parrish

    How about four walls
    this is a great insight write
    with all it`s wisdom

  • 3 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    I see this is as your life in general, and it's quite interesting to see what you see. I loved the last ending stanza the most because, this is now what we all; what humanity sees and while it's different in every way for everyone else it's unique to me. I loved the last line it truly makes me think twice about my life, since it's lively in a way and that's true my life got burned, and went up in flames, but we all heal from those wounds and keep on going even if we hate the lives we live. Thank you for sharing. 5/5

    -Mori

  • 2 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    The title is perfect...

    It needs no alternative and is colourful enough if we just use our eyes to see.

    Turquoise
    Indigo
    Tulip
    Lavender
    Evergreen
    Lime
    Eggshell
    Strawberry
    Sunrise
    ^
    Perfect, full of beauty and colour.

    Take care,

    Michael