Powerful words, and quite thought-provoking too, leading your reader to travel many avenues.
Shame you cannot think of a title. I am rubbish with titles, but I will suggest a few you can maybe play around with, or not.
Colours of Life,
Behind Four Walls,
Inside These Walls
Facts Of Life
Inside The Walls Of Life
For those who cant see grey
When color fades
The shades of grey
3 years ago
by Beautiful Soul
I do have a small suggestion for you here, in the last two lines I think in my opinion it would read better as:
even a dull life comes alive;
even a lively life gets buried.
The semi colon gives voice to the sentences being combined, and taking out "and" makes it flow better in my opinion. Nominated though because I love how much detail you put into this for being such a short write. We all see in black and white but if we opened our eyes the world is rich with color! 5/5
If one is in high life condition,that is in positive thinking,everything around seems glorious and bright .
The low life condition,that is in negative thought process, makes everything around dull and meaningless.
3 years ago
Very beautiful verses you write, Purvi. Liked it!
Well... here're few titles given below .. choose one appropriate you think you should..
#1. The Night - One Heart
#2. Darken Sky
#3. The Secret - One spirit
#4. Restless Love
#5. The Life Behind The Wall
I see this is as your life in general, and it's quite interesting to see what you see. I loved the last ending stanza the most because, this is now what we all; what humanity sees and while it's different in every way for everyone else it's unique to me. I loved the last line it truly makes me think twice about my life, since it's lively in a way and that's true my life got burned, and went up in flames, but we all heal from those wounds and keep on going even if we hate the lives we live. Thank you for sharing. 5/5