Comments : Two minutes.

  • 2 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    OMG!!!!!

  • 2 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    The title just dragged me down by my hair ! very deep very simple very raw very honest, no bet different. Quite but loud. There is like a lot of different emotions and messages to derive from this piece, esp in the opening lines.

    And then your closing!! just I am reallly fond of this poem, I am not sure how I feel about the space between your last line and the verse before it, (in regard of the style of this poem, not generally speaking), however I am just so much into this write from you.

    Def. into my favorite. two minutes! MAN....

    • 2 years ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      Thanks, Rania! Appreciate you reading. Will have to think about the space between the last line and verse before it. I'm not sure about it either.