Truly a heart rendering poem which reflects the current situations all over the globe.
The barbaric acts of the terrorist ,not sparing the little buds.
We should all awaken to such acts and take measures to stop this cruelty.
We all should work for world peace.
Loved the rhyme scheme and the perfect flow
Meena, you have a way of writing with such conviction that I just get drawn in instantly to your poems, so many emotions and messages in this piece to which may can relate to with a heavy heart and although the inspiration isn't, this piece is wonderful.
This is an awesome poem Meena ji....the message has been perfectly described, of how the world is filled with terrorism and we can find the bloods of young victims spilled everywhere..and in this cruel world love has no place of its...
This is one of those poems which reminds me that I have a favourite button! I do not use if very often, but poems like these come along and I get that instant reminder of the button, and how I would like to read this poem again!
Powerfully worded, and the content is one which is relevant right now and so many people will feel this with you at this time.
Sky touching write filled with profound sorrowful state of emotions. This is superb piece. Wow!! Your writing technic is very unique and just.
The precious red blood has really turned into black. This new generation people are much dishonoured. Many people show respect infront but they have an evil thought behind. But I believe that still good people are also there in the world like us.
I like all the messages coming out form this poem.
Once again you have proved your decent writing skill. 5/5.
I thought the power this short poem held was incredible, and very well structured into this rare form with a subtle rhyme scheme too. The content of the poem hits you hard and I think the author has made a great job wording it in such a way that the reader's connect to the poem with empathy for the situation.
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
What a wonderful and relevant write. I am currently studying the different forms (prompted by Michael Moran!) and I know a visit to your poems always helps - your knowledge of them (the forms)and ease at which you write them is always educational.
A wonderful write Meena.
All the best,