I liked this poem, much more than the first poem, Nana. Here the heating passion could be felt withing every line.

~I'm knocked down, addicted-
oh how you dazzle me!
^^^Check this:
~ knocked down, I'm addicted-
oh how you dazzle me!
^^Just a suggestion... Interesting read.

Write on~

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Oo lala *Giggle* this is a very em...enticing poem, very cute in one way and alluring in another. c:
A blend of adoration, love & lust if I'm not mistaken o:

Lovely :)

A sensual piece with some great imagery. I particularly like the idea of eyes being closed off to everything but this metaphorical light that is oh-so-real when you feel like this about someone!

Great piece, Rania