This has a lot of emotion within it and I like it for that reason. It seems this person was married before and lost her husband. She cries into her pillow at night, instead of having a happily ever after, which she thought was going to happen. she just wanted her love back and love has touched her heart but she doesn't want it to be there anymore because she knows that her love is no longer physically with her. he is in the heavens above waiting to be reunited. Now she has remarried and even she didn't know her own sadness and becomes more lost inside her heart everyday. She was pretending to be happy for the people in her life but with that she couldn't hold on for much longer and died but on the end that is what she wanted because the love of her life was waiting for her. I like this poem for its simple message but it has strong emotion with it. 5/5

Wow I am impressed this poem has emotion and depth and it's also very powerful... u told a store of how tragic love invites misery... love that title btw, u delivered a beautiful, sad poem yet the ending had a flutter of hope which is all we can hope for I guess

I enjoyed this great write

Moria,
How nice to see you writing acrostic, the narration of this sad story incorporated elegantly with the format and the title of course.

~instead of a happily ever after she,
>instead of a happily ever after, she

Nicely done my dear.

I enjoyed reading this, though not what inspired it. =/ even though it's personal, it's still a relatable topic. Just a friendly suggestion, though- punctuation wouldn't hurt =P